Literacy Narrative (Outside reading)

     Last week, I spent an hour typing and editing my first draft and 35 minutes on my second.  My draft focuses on me being infected by a staff infection and learning from reading.  I spent days in the hospital and really took advantage of my free time all day to read.  I read multiple small children books and started to enjoy reading for the first time.   This lead to me reading more and more books and I began to understand the valuable lessons that these books taught.
     I had to brainstorm some different ideas before I think I got onto something with my paper.  I spent a lot of time editing my paper and making grammatical corrections.  I also have been adding more details and have been more descriptive to try and make what I think will be a successful paper.  I'm going to keep on working and try to continue to be more descriptive details to make an A on this paper.