Literacy Narrative

 I think that the paper that I will revise and put in  my portfolio would be my Literacy Narrative that I wrote in the first semester.  I thought that that paper had some good ideas and a lot of potential.  I thought that this was one of my better papers, and I enjoyed typing it.  The traits of good writing that I will focus on, are organization, and developing ideas.

     The comments that I received on my literacy narrative were not too negative, which is why I will use this paper in my portfolio.  Most of the comments directed toward developing ideas, which will not be difficult to do.  Also, I got a comment saying my organization could have been better.  These issues should not be difficult to overcome, as I should be able to come out with a good final product in my class portfolio.